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Invisible Man revisedAm I a shadow in your eyes just to stay in the background watching as you break my heart over and over?  Am I  invisible to you just a mere refraction of light not fit for you life  
Am I not good enough for you, doomed to watch you with other guys while my heart grows black and rotten inside?  Am I the just that thing who when ever you need me I’m there but is not good enough to be with forever?  Do I really bring this on myself?   I put my self out there only to be pushed aside for something that seems better?  Or am I really that bad that you won’t even look at me in the eyes and say I Invisible Man revised
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Invisible ManAm I just a shadow in your eyes just to stay in the background watching as you break my heart over and over?  Am I just invisible to you just a mere refraction of light not fit for you life  
Am I not good enough for you, doomed to watch you with other guys while my heart grows black and rotten inside?  Am I the just that thing who when ever you need me I’m there but is not good enough to be with forever?  Do I really bring this on my self?   I put my self out there only to be pushed aside for something that looks better?  Or am I really that bad that you won’t even look at me in the eyes and say I Invisible Man
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...As I sit here thinking only of you I remember how we met  You looked over at me and a friend  You had pink hair that day were looking amazing as always  When I finally look back into your eyes I knew  I knew you were the one that would have my heart  Weeks later I asked you out  I only hinted at first but finally came out and asked you  You said you weren’t ready  I said I would wait for you  After that you distanced yourself from me  I didn’t know why  I confronted you as to why  You were just uncomfortable  You had a disappointing last relationship  We worked it ...
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  • Current Residence: In UR ass
  • Interests: Sword Smithing
  • Favourite movie: 300
  • Favourite band or musician: ME I AM THE MASTER OF DEATH METAL
  • Favourite genre of music: punk, rock, death metal,grunge
  • Favourite artist: Me
  • Favourite poet or writer: me
  • Favourite photographer: me
  • Favourite style of art: I cant draw
  • Operating System: Linux
  • MP3 player of choice: psp/zen
  • Shell of choice: I were a round pearlesent thing that is really light weight but can take phazers from space
  • Wallpaper of choice: Satan
  • Skin of choice: mine
  • Favourite game: starcraft II i hope when it is released
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: Razor and tbone from swatkats and greenlantern the flash the question and greenarrow from jla
  • Personal Quote: look death right in his eyes and say fuck you
  • Tools of the Trade: Warriors Spirit

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Mood: Lust ~Beatnick-McBratnie Feb 23, 2007, 11:32:13 AM
I am awesome doods

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I am in love with someone and they dont know it.....yet

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot
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~dragon1art Sep 23, 2005, 12:39:25 PM
Thanks for adding me to your friends list!

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-:¦:- ((¸¸.·´Angela
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~zenphoenixa Sep 23, 2005, 7:09:32 AM
G'day dear! :D I'm so sorry for being late in saying this (homework has been my life for awhile ^^; ) but I'd still like to say a big thank ye for the fav you kindly gave me on "Dying phoenix", I'm real glad you liked how it turned out! :w00t: Muchly appreciated and have a fantabolous weekend! :blowkiss: *Hands you :pie: :pie:*

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Before you criticise someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticise them, you'll be a mile away and have their shoes. :D

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Save the World! NC-17 the Bish!
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~aragornbird Sep 9, 2005, 11:45:50 AM
Thanks for the fav! :hug:

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~Beatnick-McBratnie Sep 10, 2005, 4:29:59 PM
your welcome
=D

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Everybody's got a little something to hide, but me
Everybody's got a little someone to crush, but me
I'm living in a human teenage mediocrity
Everybody's got a little someone to trust, but me
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~Spock-chan Jul 5, 2005, 8:25:18 PM
kyru-chan! I ruv yoooooou! I misses you... Heh, I guess PRTF did no good.
SECRET: "Classified Residence" means Durham! ^_^
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~Beatnick-McBratnie Jul 4, 2005, 12:48:31 PM
my new poem is me working on prosody and i sorta came up with the style with insperation from haiku

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Down with war and discrimination!

I am a pacifist. :)

I see in green only
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~blackloser13 May 25, 2005, 4:24:06 PM
Randomly found you account. But in the poem "I Love Them" instead of using "2" why not write it out. Like make it "two." Unless you want to use the number...your poem. Just putting in my opinion.
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~GreeneCounty Mar 18, 2005, 3:45:34 PM
You're still young but have good potential in rhyming schemes. I might have been reading wrong, but the beat of your poems seems to be about the only key you need to work on.
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~Beatnick-McBratnie Jul 10, 2005, 11:06:55 AM
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iworked on the beat some and came up w/ this hope you like it thanks for the tip

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Down with war and discrimination!

I am a pacifist. :)

I see in green only
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